Welcome to Shards of Silver

Marianne Moore once defined 'poetry' as "Imaginary gardens with real toads in them". I found this such a striking definition of something that captures the values of poetry that I couldn't leave it alone.

I've been writing - attempting - poetry since I knew how to hold a pen(cil). Some poems I write I like, most I don't, but every now and then I feel compelled to write them down, like a flush of emotion that demands access to some sort of visible medium that can later be accessed and reconsidered. I thought, maybe, that sharing these poems could help me out a little. I welcome critiques, critical and constructive (though I do, of course reserve the right to ignore the sharper sides of people's tongues ;) ), and hope that in return for your help I can leave you with something better than sorry attempts at a craft which only a tiny few have ever really mastered.

Clear Skies~V

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

The Bruised Bride

It's the way his hand falls,
                                      catching the light
                                 almost cutting in.
Rapid flashes uperceptable of light shadow light
As his hand moves in front of the desk lamp.
It's the light of a train skittering through a tunnel
dark light dark
His eyes don't move but stay steady and enraged
dark dark dark
It's when the hand lands
                                    then it stops flickering
and suddenly
                                                                  everything is clear
and hazy.

Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Grief

I see the shadow of the rain as its about to fall,
Gray ribbons in the air like northern lights
Strewn over my vision a mantle of my self-deception.
There are no golden fields or glassy lakes that I see,
Flashing by in half-manifested reality,
The starry starry night gone past tranquil to empty pale,
And all I see is the shadow of the rain.

Returns

No definitions and no strings
An instrumental duet between drummer and flautist:
Steady unbreaking and blending tone
filled with varying change.
Young and sometimes still childish the
curling melody believes herself free
but comes back again to the steady rhythms.
No demands and few questions
Just the lazy falconer holding his arm out and up:
Unthinking and generally calm
weighed against her skyborn temperment.
Wheeling she might stray far from him
but she knows and so does he
his arm is home unthinkingly.

Monday, March 29, 2010

Gutless Generation

TV blaring video games firing guns
and automobiles,
Cacaphony of clamors and lost coins rambling
Drowning out sermons of book or parent.
Runaway junkie daughter parked on
her corner of street,
Selling wares only the rich can keep;
But Joe Blo'll pay the eleven minutes
and she'll get her fix eventually.
Teenage bumblers hop on a bus:
Theirs is a different part of town
with shopping malls.
Shiny cars line the streets and behind
silver glass dolls display wares only they will wear but everyone buys.
The church is dead and God needs a megaphone,
Responsible adults need shotguns 
to get anywhere with the rotten core of society these days.

Ophelia Drowned

Ophelia drowned was beautiful still,
With frail palor and silken skin,
Flower guardians to shepherd her way
From ebb to flow from tide to day.
We drowned her and nothing's the same,
Lost our cause to falling tears,
Blinding aims have slain our goddess,
Doused the stars of fire
Brought the world to silence
Kills his love undoubtable,
Too much water we wept for ourselves
And for our flaws Ophelia's drown'd.

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Judgement


Poetry is sometimes lost in its making,
Words lose their meanings inevitably in the despair.
Even the most plain speech fails to matter,
When all I see in your eyes,
                                  smiling so calmly,
Is the flash of the sword behind me.

Friday, March 5, 2010

First

He is coffee's aftermath,
The drowning colours of caffeine and smoke.
Butterflies storming
Washing off the desire of a bulletproof vest.
Run fingers through dark hair
Catching fragile in silk cement applied that morning.
He is the beauty of the Tarot deck.
Kiss the night of woven fingers
Beyond the violetly soft JD and coke.