Welcome to Shards of Silver

Marianne Moore once defined 'poetry' as "Imaginary gardens with real toads in them". I found this such a striking definition of something that captures the values of poetry that I couldn't leave it alone.

I've been writing - attempting - poetry since I knew how to hold a pen(cil). Some poems I write I like, most I don't, but every now and then I feel compelled to write them down, like a flush of emotion that demands access to some sort of visible medium that can later be accessed and reconsidered. I thought, maybe, that sharing these poems could help me out a little. I welcome critiques, critical and constructive (though I do, of course reserve the right to ignore the sharper sides of people's tongues ;) ), and hope that in return for your help I can leave you with something better than sorry attempts at a craft which only a tiny few have ever really mastered.

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Showing posts with label religion. Show all posts
Showing posts with label religion. Show all posts

Thursday, February 18, 2010

Eden's Folly

Here these steps I’ve walked before,
This pathway through the broken grass,
                                                  trees fading:
Our road from paradise lost.
Caught quietly in forced reality,
                                                   Your smile:
I remember from before Eden’s folly.
I would rather sin than innocence
For when I choose to love you.